Everything is not
All is
Still
There is a ringing
In the air though
The bell was struck long ago
Now
A cold
Without harshness
A void
Without disappointment
And
A pregnant pause
Like a rollercoaster
Suspended
Poised to dive
Then
Breathe with me
Make the sounds
Vibrate the
I…
A…
O…
Echoes
Of the rhythm of life
And Finally
Nothing is
Nothing
Is not
Nothing
But
Postliminal
***
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Very well done. I like how you break your sentences.
A pregnant pause – I love this one.
A lot of people have been using the ‘roller coaster’ metaphor lately. An emotional one?
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Thank you 😊 Yes, the roller coaster metaphor is used a lot. That feeling when it slows and hangs just before a big drop… That’s what I was going for.
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And did it very successfully.
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Awesome this is!
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Thank you so much 😊
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Sure!😊
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A pregnant pause of genius!
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Is a pause of genius a good thing…?
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Yes! It is a perfect thing despite and because of the fact that it’s not really a thing.
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😁
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On the Threshold of a Dream…Dream…dream…dream…
Cool.
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This is so beautiful! Especially…
“A void
Without disappointment”
What a gorgeous line! ❤
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Thank you so much 😊
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Great poem. I love your way with words.
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Thank you very much 😊
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Pregnant pause was a very striking phrase.
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